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(74 votes) Published: Mar 13, 2008 8:04 p.m. In 2 Favorites Lists Viewed 588 times
Dear,
those whom it may concern,
Prolouge:
As i sleep silently and none others are waking,i wake in a cold sweat. I look around my desolate room frantically and see nothing but emptiness. At this point i start to worry as i went to sleep in my own room. I swiftly awaken and arouse my closet. I rub my hand up and down its pure oaken goodness only to find none other than Ricky Martin. Ricky martin admits to being gay and goes to see his boyfriend, Alle, as i hear Alle’s love screams from down the hall ponder. Are all things actually inherently silly?...i think about this for quite a while and i then realize the walls around me are changing.
Chapter 1:
As the walls morph to my needs, desires, fears, etc. i am overcome with sadness and the walls as i know them are all but whisked away. Nothing left for me to see, or hear. I am now standing in a long hallway as black as the sun is bright. I look farther down the hall hoping to see someone in my similar predicament. i see no-one. As if on some divine command a bright light flickers in the end of the hallway of my mind. I resort to following this daemonic light through my hall. As i burst into a clearing i feel as if nothing had ever mattered in my life other than that moment.
chapter2:
After i study my surrounding i make mental note of where i am, a large flat clearing in a dense forest. I hear birds and animals all around me. As i study these new sounds a sight all vanishes in the blink of an eye, i am now surrounded with a bright light. I think to myself believing i could quite possibly be in hell...or heaven. I then feel an oblong , slimy object enter my ear canal. And am aroused from my deep sleep.
chapter 3:
I wake to my dogs warm embrace and his systematic ear lick. I smile to myself as i feel a warm ray of sunshine engulf my entire figure. I roll to my left and see the most beautiful thing i have ever imagined. there sitting in my bed was the love of my life. she had no face that i could see and she had no body i could see but i could imagine her being and i slowly rise from my bed.
chapter 4:
As my ritual entails i wake to a warm shower and all is fine. As my shower is warming my world is thrust into darkness. I awake to my shower still warming but in a dark flickering lighted setting. as i am showering i examine my water, feeling silkier and more flowing than ever. i determine the unknown substance to be blood. As i come upon this realization i am scared beyond all belief. The fear that gripped my heart was indescribable. i scream.and am once more thrust into a world of the unknown.
chapter 5:
as i wake i come to realization that i was asleep in the hall where everything started. As i determine my situation i feel a cold bead of sweat dribbling down the small of my back. I look around my desolate room....
This is the beginning of a new Egg series called "The Story Never To End’ please keep track if you will of my updates to the plot...at the end of my series you will feel as i feel, believe as i believe and walk MY path throughout the wakes of my mind. Thank you and stay tuned for later updates.
Mar 13, 2008 8:11 pm - I didn’t read it I’m tried, but I’m sure it’s great I’m going to favs it and I’ll read/vote it tomorrow, I’m sure its a easy 45 points for you from me (5*****)
M r 13, 2008 8:37 pm - i gave you the benefit of the doubt and read it...
it was shit.
get a live journal and put your shit there, with all the other peoples shit.
just not here.
Mar 13, 2008 10:07 pm - 0*. No punctuation. You can’t write stories for shit. I should post my shit in an egg and pwn the crap out of you with it.
Protip: Starting 90% of your sentences with "I" is not a good way to write.
Mar 14, 2008 5:21 am - hmm well in my defense i realize that i started most sentences with "I" and i knew it when i typed it. Its just the repetition and its not actually a story.
its a dream i had a few nights ago and i decided to tell rotten eggs about it, this is just the first part and i realize it seems like it has, virtually, no importance whatsoever. BUT as the dream progressed it got REALLY REALLY disturbing. Which most people on RE have some kind of sick need for information for mentioned.
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