n00b took some photo’s and made a DA
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| Posted: Mar 10, 2007 10:25 p.m. - Subject: n00b took some photo’s and made a DA |
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Here are the photos I took, they are just around my house.
Heres my thingy. I don’t have much stuff on it.
http://gruntle.deviantart.com/
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| Posted: Mar 11, 2007 1:00 a.m. - Subject: |
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| Posted: Mar 11, 2007 2:06 a.m. - Subject: |
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Thanks, your critcism will definately help me improve!
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| Posted: Mar 11, 2007 9:24 p.m. - Subject: |
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they seem a little boring..but i definatly like the last one
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| Posted: Mar 13, 2007 3:31 a.m. - Subject: |
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the last one is the best one, it’s really good, what to do if you want to improve is to have less details and things in your pics
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| Posted: Mar 13, 2007 6:33 a.m. - Subject: |
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Yes. Your cat looks very angry. I like the one of the trees because i normally dont see those kinds of trees.
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| Posted: Mar 16, 2007 8:50 a.m. - Subject: |
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The last one is good. I like critising your stuff like you’re going to criticise my spelling in a second.
Anyway, at least it’s constructive, eh? Anyway some tips:
1. Focus on the subject of what you take. You have loads of crowded crap in it, dead leaves and stuff people don’t want to see.
2. Try different angles. Your cat for example, hold a treat above it and then take the picture underneath his head slightly. Don’t tease him, give him the treat afterwards =]
3. Get lots of sky in your pictures =]
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| Posted: Mar 16, 2007 8:52 a.m. - Subject: |
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The last one is good. I like critising your stuff like you\\’re going to criticise my spelling in a second.
Anyway, at least it\\’s constructive, eh? Anyway some tips:
1. Focus on the subject of what you take. You have loads of crowded crap in it, dead leaves and stuff people don\\’t want to see.
2. Try different angles. Your cat for example, hold a treat above it and then take the picture underneath his head slightly. Don\\’t tease him, give him the treat afterwards =]
3. Get lots of sky in your pictures =]
oh and 4. Sort out your lighting. In the last picture it looks good but in the others the sun should be diagonally behind you, not invisible, The first one I can’t work out what it is..
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| Posted: Mar 16, 2007 1:34 p.m. - Subject: |
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I took this one a few days ago, thanks for the comments.
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| Posted: Mar 19, 2007 5:19 a.m. - Subject: |
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nice, adjust the colors of the orange in the clouds to a brighter orange, neat with the silhuette effect of the trees, might want to cut out the small tree tops down at the bottom
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| Posted: Mar 19, 2007 9:44 p.m. - Subject: |
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I don’t want to post process it, it makes it look better than it is in real life, IMO thats not the point of photography unless your trying to sell something
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| Posted: Mar 20, 2007 5:47 p.m. - Subject: |
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Quote: I don’t want to post process it, it makes it look better than it is in real life
"Im here to present art, not the actual representation of the scene"
Quote: IMO thats not the point of photography
Then what exactly is the point of photography? I do it for the enjoyment.
Quote: unless your trying to sell something
Id like to sell some of my prints, I dont find any of my work to be printable quite yet.
Even then thats just a bonus, I dont do it for the sales, I do it for the enjoyment. Whats the point if you aint enjoying what you do.
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| Posted: Mar 21, 2007 6:10 a.m. - Subject: |
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well you can’t take perfect shots each time, if you want that then good luck, cropping the pic isnt even categorized as post processing
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